Ships is what they called them

Across the great water is where they came from

Value they placed in the shiny stones found on our land

Almost dead is how they first arrived at our shores

Gave them food, shelter, and care is what we did

Enemy is how they came to see us

Savages is what they tried to name us
 
Hello everyone,

This is the first in a series of writings I have been working on for the World Anvil to talk about the motivations and life of my (a group of) Revenant(s). I hope to release one every Sunday and need some pressure to keep me going. I will try to do them in a kind of chronological order but I have some of the beginning and end but need to work on the middle.

I would love any feedback and comments. I know it will be hard since you don't know the whole concept but I would like each piece to be able to stand on its own. Hopefully, some people will link the thread I am trying to weave through the story but please uses spoiler tags if you think you might spoil the meaning for others who might not want that. We have some great detectives on the forum.