So Denis had posted the following in the general chat today on discord.
Crimson dreams with consciousness streams,
the Leper King is crowned.
Crimson dreams with consciousness screams,
the empire of men are bound.
Crimson dreams with consciousness beams,
the white knight is found.
Crimson dreams with consciousness seams,
the world is unwound.
This is an excerpt from "At the Spine of the Dead Dreamer" and is a hint of things to come
Shortly after i read that, I figured i could respond to it and crafted out this one....
CRIMSONS' TWILIGHT
Cursed dreams, with cursed screams,
The wound the blade had brought.
A board, a game, of mortal claim,
Two lords a battle fought.
Of death, and change, those stars arranged.
Lords' master wanted ought.**
These seven suns, this Islirith,***
He had heard of naught.
To sage and priest the white knight went,
To cleanse the blade he caught.*
They prayed, they plead, in dire need.
Though, the blade had earned his spot.****
*(was formerly fought, but changing it helps reduce re-usage of same last word)
** (was formerly - Lords' master it did want.)
***(was formerly - seven suns, Islirith)
****(formerly "in the end it mattered not" - added though, then revised to the new line)
*****(Added title)
Here is what I wrote before all the revisions.
Cursed dream, with cursed screams
The wound the blade had brought.
A board, a game, of mortal claim.
two lord battle fought.
Of death, and change, those stars arranged.
Lords master it did want.
Seven suns, Islirith,
He had heard of naught.
To sage and priest the white knight went.
to clense the blade he fought.
They prayed, they pleed, in dire need.
It would matter not.
Crimson dreams with consciousness streams,
the Leper King is crowned.
Crimson dreams with consciousness screams,
the empire of men are bound.
Crimson dreams with consciousness beams,
the white knight is found.
Crimson dreams with consciousness seams,
the world is unwound.
This is an excerpt from "At the Spine of the Dead Dreamer" and is a hint of things to come
Shortly after i read that, I figured i could respond to it and crafted out this one....
CRIMSONS' TWILIGHT
Cursed dreams, with cursed screams,
The wound the blade had brought.
A board, a game, of mortal claim,
Two lords a battle fought.
Of death, and change, those stars arranged.
Lords' master wanted ought.**
These seven suns, this Islirith,***
He had heard of naught.
To sage and priest the white knight went,
To cleanse the blade he caught.*
They prayed, they plead, in dire need.
Though, the blade had earned his spot.****
*(was formerly fought, but changing it helps reduce re-usage of same last word)
** (was formerly - Lords' master it did want.)
***(was formerly - seven suns, Islirith)
****(formerly "in the end it mattered not" - added though, then revised to the new line)
*****(Added title)
Here is what I wrote before all the revisions.
Cursed dream, with cursed screams
The wound the blade had brought.
A board, a game, of mortal claim.
two lord battle fought.
Of death, and change, those stars arranged.
Lords master it did want.
Seven suns, Islirith,
He had heard of naught.
To sage and priest the white knight went.
to clense the blade he fought.
They prayed, they pleed, in dire need.
It would matter not.
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